Actually two parts, but yeah. I wrote 'em. Meant to write a third part, buuut... >_> Never really got around to it. Featuring exhibitionist!monaboyd and strawberry shortcake. Full headers within the links.Not The Usual, Part INot The Usual, Part II
You all are going to turn me to RPS! That was awesome, so hot! I love in the restaurant, damn, if I was the server, I wouldn'tve left! I love it I love it I love it! Please post soon! :biglove:
MY. God. That was, hands down, the hottest peice of RPS that I've ever read, not to mention heartbreakingly well written. I especially liked the way you'd occationally throw two words together, like "shuddershouted" and "flutterflicking" to describe a sensation that is, essentially, indescribable. I would tend to be a bit cautious saying that a guy is fluttering all too often though... brings to mind a bit all the bad gay-guy pansiness steriotypes one tries so hard to avoid most of the time. Oh, and dom's eyeliner was a beautiful detail- added just that extra bit of sultry... well, domination, if you don't mind the almost-pun. Anyway, yeah. I want to read more and more of your work. You're by far my new favorite amature author. Go you.
Eee thank you both! :blush: High praise indeed... I try.