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Title: Light In Moria
Description: Pippin/Merry


mistofstars - November 3, 2007 01:49 PM (GMT)
Uhm, alright. I'm actually afraid to post this, because I'm not too sure about it, since no-one has read this before. So...
It's also in the Library, but I've not received any feedback, and I wonder if this fic is really so bad :blink:
I hope it's not too long, but I still think it's a short-fic!

[Rating: PG13
Warnings: Somewhat kitschy :lol:
Summary: It's dark and lifeless in the Mines of Moria,
but fortunately Merry's got someone to chase all the blackness away...
Disclaimer- nothing's mine, no profit made
Lyrics at the beginning are taken from "Zero Sum" by Nine Inch Nails, so not mine, too. ]
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Light in Moria


[Admin: it's short, but not *that* short. And seeing as it's already posted in LoM, linking is preferred]

Opal - December 29, 2007 04:30 AM (GMT)
How very sweet, mos! I enjoyed this. :)

This part really touched me--

"Your skin was pale in the sunlight, and your eyes were the most valuable sapphires I'd
even seen.
I swear, if I had not fallen in love with you before, I surely would have fallen in love
with you then.
And how you stared into my eyes, Merry..." Pippin whispered.

"I felt as if you had pierced my heart... I got lost in you..."

Keep it up, dear! :wine:


mistofstars - December 29, 2007 01:25 PM (GMT)
@opal

oowwww thank you so much for reading and commenting my fic :smooch:
I am really pleased that you like it :biglove:
You're actually the first person who read it (beside me)
so I'm really nervous and excited and relieved that you like it :lol:

Actually I'm writing on a new fanfiction...
(I mentioned it in the HFC xD) and it only waits to be finished...
Again it will be Merry/Pip as pairing ^-^

Opal - December 29, 2007 08:00 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (mistofstars @ Dec 29 2007, 07:25 AM)







Again it will be Merry/Pip as pairing ^-^

YAY! Can't wait. :w00t: :dance:

And you are quite welcome, mos! It was such a lovely M/P piece. :D




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