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Kaimla Marner, Accepted| BirgitteMo |
 Posted: Apr 12 2004, 04:32 PM
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 Shipmistress of the Sea Foam  Group: Members Posts: 275 Member No.: 10 Joined: 12-April 04  |
Age: 15
Height: 5'4 Hair: brown, curly Homeland: Caemlyn Weight: 129lbs Eyes: grey Bio: Kaimla scurried over the fence that blocked her from the inn. She had a loaf of bread under her arm, a jug in her shirt and butter in her boot, not to mention the guard on her tail. Her theif life started 3 years ago when her parents died in a fire. "Jose! Catch" She shrieked, as she clammered over the fence and threw the bread. "Did you here? Theres an Aes Sedai in town! We'd better stay off the streets untill shes gone." "I know," her freind replied, "but you might want to go to her to discuss your... problem before you die from it." "You mean this problem?" Kaimla asked as she levetated the jug with the crook of a finger. "Its nothing! It wont harm me!" Inside, Kaimla knew that her friend was right, it could kill her. But when she did it, it made her feel so... so complete. The warmth that flowed into her as she levitated things was so satisfying. "You're going anyway. Tomorrow at noon. I wont let you die." "Im not going." The next day couldnt come slow enough for Kaimla. She didnt want to meet and Aes Sedai in fear of becoming one herself. But eventually, tomorrow came, and Josie dragged her to the place where the Aes Sedai was staying. "We're here to see the Aes Sedai," Josie stated to the innkeeper, "My friend here has a problem that she wants to talk about with her." "Down the hall and to the left." Replied the innkeeper. They silently trudged down the hall to the Aes Sedai's room. Josie knocked. The door silently slid open to reveal a man with stony features standing by the far wall, and a woman sitting on the bed in the middle of the room. "Excuse me, Aes Sedai, for intruding," Josie said meekly," but my friend, Kaimla Marner, would like to discuss something with you." The Aes Sedai considdered the proposition for a moment, then beckoned for Kaimla to come forward. She looked at Kaimla, as if weighing her, and then motioned for her to speak. "Aes Sedai, i am here because of a problem. I cant describe it, so ill show it to you." She silently looked around the room for something to move. She finally decided on a jug on the old desk. It levetated, and moved over 3 inches. The womans face remained calm throughout the process, as if she had expected it to happen all along. "That is no problem that you have. You have the ability to touch the true source. I will be taking you to the White Tower, where you will learn to be an Aes Sedai" -------------------- The Future is Newt.
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| ladyofchaos |
Posted: Apr 12 2004, 04:37 PM
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 The Dark One Group: Admin Posts: 246 Member No.: 1 Joined: 7-April 04 |
Hi Meg...
 K, critique... Maybe if you worked the description at the top into it? Like 'her grey eyes widened at the thought of the Aes Sedai...' just a thought... and more description in general. But pretty good for a first timer!  --------------------  Soon comes the day when all shall be free- Even you, and even me. Soon comes the day when all shall die; Surely you, but never I.  |
 
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| BirgitteMo |
Posted: Apr 13 2004, 03:37 PM
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Shipmistress of the Sea Foam Group: Members Posts: 275 Member No.: 10 Joined: 12-April 04 |
i forgot... Kaimla is a Dreamwalker.
-------------------- The Future is Newt.
Living is easy with eyes closed. |
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| ladyofchaos |
Posted: Apr 13 2004, 06:43 PM
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Forgot. Uh huh.
-------------------- Soon comes the day when all shall be free- Even you, and even me. Soon comes the day when all shall die; Surely you, but never I. |
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| BirgitteMo |
Posted: Apr 19 2004, 04:51 PM
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Shipmistress of the Sea Foam Group: Members Posts: 275 Member No.: 10 Joined: 12-April 04 |
so nice of you to believe me...
 -------------------- The Future is Newt.
Living is easy with eyes closed. |
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| ladyofchaos |
Posted: Apr 19 2004, 05:27 PM
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The Dark One Group: Admin Posts: 246 Member No.: 1 Joined: 7-April 04 |
well i DID suggest it...
 -------------------- Soon comes the day when all shall be free- Even you, and even me. Soon comes the day when all shall die; Surely you, but never I. |
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| BirgitteMo |
Posted: Apr 20 2004, 04:20 PM
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Shipmistress of the Sea Foam Group: Members Posts: 275 Member No.: 10 Joined: 12-April 04 |
SHUT UP!
hehehe i know!! well u at least suggested the Wise one thing.. which led to the dreamwalking... so.. ya -------------------- The Future is Newt.
Living is easy with eyes closed. |
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| WoT_Eagle |
Posted: Apr 25 2004, 10:23 AM
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 Mistress of Ships Group: Members Posts: 80 Member No.: 12 Joined: 20-April 04 |
very cool character megs! um, mine probably won't ever meet yours but it could happen (but probably not) oh well
-------------------- Dovie'andi se tovya saigen
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| BirgitteMo |
Posted: Apr 26 2004, 04:32 PM
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Shipmistress of the Sea Foam Group: Members Posts: 275 Member No.: 10 Joined: 12-April 04 |
Marina?!?!? YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you should tell first. I had no clue who u were!
-------------------- The Future is Newt.
Living is easy with eyes closed. |
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| WoT_Eagle |
 Posted: Jul 21 2004, 08:15 AM
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Mistress of Ships Group: Members Posts: 80 Member No.: 12 Joined: 20-April 04 |
( this is Marina, btw) how could you not tell it was me? just look at the pic. it's Matrim...yay!!
 (that's me looking at Matrim) -------------------- Dovie'andi se tovya saigen
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| BirgitteMo |
Posted: Jul 30 2004, 05:35 PM
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Shipmistress of the Sea Foam Group: Members Posts: 275 Member No.: 10 Joined: 12-April 04 |
Well... other people could have that picture?
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Living is easy with eyes closed. |
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