Character Sign up, Read it or bleed.

The following people will need to sign up in this thread to be able to rp.

ShadowLink
Codyizzy
DL
Comoes
Metlord


If your name is on the list, it's because I barely trust you to make a coherant/smart enough character to live through five seconds.

So, if you are on the list, you're going to have to sign up and submit a character in here to try to get it. I'LL be the judge.

Good luck. (You'll need it...)

Adler Gewehr: Hunter/Human (Honestly have no clue where I can stick him as of right now)

Age: 25

Equipment: Light Weight Armor (allows greater speed and agility than normal armor, yet sacrifices defensive), Dual Busters with rapid fire capability (when on rapid fire each individual shot is twice times as weak than normal), Burst Dash

Adler was raised to become a respectable young man. He was taught to have a reasonably well sense of honor by his parents, and was taught greatly the value of team work through the many team sports he played in high school. After graduating High School he joined the Hunters and was put through basic training. He showed great promise in agility and speed, but lacked strength and durability.

Personality: Tends to keep to himself most of the time, but has no problem doing things with other people. Often trains to better himself, and spends most of his time off training either physically or mentally. He tends to do a lot more physical training because he views it as more fun than mental training. Greatly believes in teamwork and is more effective in a group rather than by himself. Tends to be overly modest, tries to keep a low profile because he hates the spotlight.

Upsides- Very good and reliable team player, fast and agile. Can also be useful as a scout.

Downsides- Has a hard time holding his own if without any support. He doesn’t pack much of a punch and can’t take as much punishment. (As to Hunter standards)



(If the base character gets accepted I'll talk to the other RPers to see where he could be accecpted so far as in a unit)

Okay. One problem I have with this is the fact that he has the burst dash.... The burst dash being a function that as far as I can tell, only Franco has. I looks like you had the idea to just up and rip that off of him just because your character is good at speed. So unless Franco says it's okay for your character to have the burst dash. I'm gonna have to slap a big fat "REJECTED" on this submission and you'll have to make a new character for trying to rip off of Franco.

Name: Ishikawa L, J.
Race: Human
Job: Spotter
Age: 24
Equipment: .38 caliber, clothing, .
Personality: quiet, detirmined, bull headed.
Background: Ishi grew up in a military endorsed family. After finishing high school Ishikawa signed up for the Maverick hunters, his inability to keep up in combat allowed him to excell in computer and spotter related fields.

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Not only does your "Just because he failed in fighting, he succeeded in being a navi" sound kinda stupid, it makes no sense. Thats like "I cant throw a punch right... But look! I just learned how to track down mavericks locations in less than 30 seconds while failing to learn how to throw this punch! I R THE GREAT!" And at that, a character of yours as a spotter isn't a bright idea. A spotter needs to be aware of the surrounding, quick to support the team on the field, and smart.... In which 99% of any of your characters have been lacking. So, granted if someone playing a hunter would piss your off, you would most likely do something hair brained and put them in a bad situation.

Sorry, but I really dont think you playing as a spotter is a good idea. Definatily with that logic of HOW he became a spotter. Sorry, but this aint gonna fly. Try again.

Sorry if I'm off again,
Name: Christopher B.
Age: late teens
Personality: Calm nearly all the time, able to lose rational thought in an instant.
Race: Human
Job: Civilian
Equipment: sunglasses, clothing, nothing of real note.
Back story: Grew up mainly around the philosophy information is better then gold or the greatest money. (don't bite my head off right here.) Life went by smoothly until it came to gettting a job. He didn't trust the Mav hunters, and went for the field of data management for a average sized company. He's thus far been keeping tabs on several small investments nothing overly major.

What the hell does that have to do with anything, Dl? Why doesn't he trust the hunters? What have they done for him to NOT have his trust when they practically worked their ass off to make sure he was alright and still breathing? If anything, he should be greatful. I'm gonna need an explaination here.