Chris Barden

[1LTBarden]

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Character Name: Chris Barden
Known Aliases: None
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height/Weight: 215lb. 6'2"
Faction: Tau'ri
Rank: 1LT United State Marines
Homeworld: Earth/ CT
Current Place of Residence: Atlantis
Galaxy: Pegasus

- Personality -
He is a pretty easy going guy and is well liked by the men he serves with. In his down time he tends to be the practical joker of the group but when the situation becomes serious he is all business and focuses on the task at hand.

- Detailed History -
Is the only son of John and Michelle Barden. Growing up in CT as a boy he always dreamed of something more. Being an only child he was able to excel equally at school and sports. His father worked for a furniture delivery store and his mother is a teacher. He spent alot of time with his Uncle Daniel Barden who was a Major in the united states army. He always said one day he would out rank him. Football was his sport of choice growing up because he loved the competiiveness of it. In highschool he excelled on the field and in the classroom. He lead his team to back to back state titles while earning the number 4 spot in his graduating class. Along with football he excelled in the JROTC program at highschool earning the rank of cadet Lt. Col and being named the battalion commander his final year in the program. He started dating Lisa O'Leary during their sophmore year. Over the summer after their junior year for unknown reasons Lisa decided to call it quits which made Chris work ever harder to earn an appointment to the Naval Academy in Anapolis, MD. He received his congressional endorsement by Nany Johnson and by the fall after his graduation he set his sights on the Academy. While at the academy he decided to give up on football and concentrate on his military career. In his four years there he excelled highly when put into leadership roles. Upon graduation he chose the Marine Corps as his destination and fell into favor quickly with his willingness to take on duties other Marines hesitated at. He went through the screening process for the United States Marine Corps Forces Special Operations Command where he ended up being assigned to 3rd Marine special operations battalion out of Camp Lejune North Carolina. Upon arrival during a routine physical exam it was discovered that he had a small amount of the ancient gene and the news was immediatley passed on to stargate command. Upon hearing this news he met with his superiors who informed him he was being transferred to an undisclosed location. He was surprised and hesitant at first as he had just arrived in North Carolina but as he was always a good marine he followed his orders. He was transported to Stargate Command and after completeing his SGC training he was informed of his assignment to Atlantis as a member of one of the security teams.

- Strengths && Weaknesses -

1. Strength 1:Personable
2. Strength 2 :Focused
3. Strength 3 :Ability to follow orders without question
4. Strength 4 :Always positive no matter the situation

1. Weakness 1 :Arrogant
2. Weakness 2 :Sometimes lazy when stagnant
3. Weakness 3 :Doesnt know when to take a rest after long periods of activity
4. Weakness 4 :Gets irritated when people talk techno babble around him

- Appearance -
light brown hair in traditional high and tight Marine cut. Has a medium muscular build and hazel eyes. Can always be seen in Black Garrison uniform when not off world. When off world he will wear either the digital woodland urban or desert MARPAT uniform.

- Inventory -
Choose Starting Items From Here:
1X M9 Bayonet
1X Beretta M9
1X FNP90
10X Frag Grenade
1x Body Armor

- RP Sample -
This is my first attempt at this type of rp but I will include a sample from my rps on a different type of site.

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(The camera fades into a neighborhood with nice looking houses. Chris O'leary can be seen walking up to a front door with a big bag in his hands. Chris notices and speaks.)

Chris: Oh hey you're just on time for thanksgiving with the O'Leary family. Now you probably think I have food or something in this bag. Not a chance in hell. (Chris opens the bag to reveal that its full of Guinness.) Now thats what I call a thanksgiving treat. I guess its time to go in.

(Chris opens the door and is greeted by his family. He brings the bag into the kitchen and dumps the Guinness into the aluminum tub full of ice. His family lets out a groan like they know whats coming. He just looks at them and grabs a can. Chris's cousin Robbie comes up to talk to him.)

Robbie: Hey Chris I didn't think you would make it this year seeing as how now you are a professional wrestler. Dude that's awsome. But one question. I saw you call out The Undertaker and challenge him to a Hell In A Cell match. What was that like?

Chris: (chugs down his Guinness completely before he speaks) Robbie you know what it wasnt as intimidating as you would have thought. I mean I was alittle scared up until he wussed out on a chance of a lifetime for him to step into the Cell with me. I thought I notcied a wet spot in the ring where he stood. I think he might have peed alittle.

Robbie: Are you serious? Dude thats pretty funny. But still at least HBK and Edge have been saying stuff lately.

Chris: Yeah thats true. Did you see that hotel they were at? Man that place was amasing. The only thing that worried me was that bar looked alittle gay. I'm not saying anything but Edge and HBK were talking about their looks to each other alittle to much. But again I'm not saying anything. Besides Luke and Scottie can handle those two.

Robbie: Speaking of Luke and Scottie they didn't come with you?

Chris: Nah I guess they had things to do for thanksgiving. Besides I wanted to spend time with my family and catch up with everyone. Hows Camille doing?

Robbie: Don't get me started on Camille. She saw you on TV the other day drinking the Guinness in the ring. Now all she does is run around the house jumping on furniture chugging soda and spilling it all over the place.

(At the mention of her name Camille comes running into the room.)

Camille: Uncle Chris! (She runs up and gives Chris a big hug.) Did dad tell you I act just like you at home?

Chris: Yes he did and I must tell you it feels great knowing you want to be like me. (Camille runs away into the other room.)

Robbie: Thanks Chris thanks alot. you're a big help. (Robbie walks away disgusted with how Chris handled that.)

Chris: Dude come on I was only encourageing her to be outspoken and to have some fun. Man I tell you this is why I drink around the holidays. There is no pleasing this family.

(At that moment the family is called in for dinner. They all sit down at the table. Chris mother speaks.)

Mother O'Leary: Now Chris you take it easy this year on the drinking. You remember what happened with you and Uncle Bill last year. You notice he isnt even hear this time.

Chris: Ma I'm telling you it wasn't the alcohol. He started it. He deserved the ass kicking he got last year. Speaking of which no one filmed it did they?

Mother O'Leary: No and regardless of who started it you didnt need to throw him through the front window. You cost your father and I alot of money. Which now that I see you're working you can finally pay us back.

Chris: Ma please let me at least enjoy my meal before you start yapping about money I owe you or how much I drink. Yes I'm working now. Yes you'll get your damn money. Ok can we drop it and finish eating.

(Everybody continues to eat in silence. Chris and the rest of the men old enough to drink are pretty drunk by the time everyone is done eating. Chris's dad speaks up when the table is clear.)

Father O'Leary: Now Chris I don't why it took you so long to find a job. You always had the talent just not the drive to go anywhere. Do you know what I'm saying?

Chris:(Stands up and slams his fists on the table.) Yeah I do know what you're saying. I think You're saying that you want some of what unlce Bill got last year. Is that what you're saying?

(Chris starts heading towards his dad when the rest of the men all jump up and start arguing with eachother until a big fight breaks out. Chris throws his dad onto the table and out of nowhere does a flying elbow drop through the table.)

Mother O'Leary: For Christ sake can't we have one holiday where you drunks don't start a fight and break something. Now that's enough all of you. Get into the family room now. We are going to have a nice family chat.

(Everyone stops fighting and heads into the family room. They all sit in various chairs and on various couches.)

Mother O'Leary: Now Chris why don't you tell us about your job.

Chris: Ma have you been living under a rock? Do you know watch your only son on TV? Well let me explain what I do. I'm a wrestler for the DXX. On Friday I have a match against the Undertaker Edge and HBK. But don't you worry. I have teammates of my own. Guess what ma? They're Irish also. Luke and Scottie are two of the best teammates I could ask for. You can't get any better than those guys. Together the three of us form the Irish Connection. Yup the Irish Connection. See Ma I'm still wearing the kilt I begged you to buy for me. I even wrestle in it. It's the only thing I wear. I wonder if that's why I can't get a date? But anyways ma can't you see your only child is doing something good finally with his life? Can't you see that ma? I really hope you guys don't bug me about the table thing. You know how it is with the men on the holidays. We drink and fight and stuff gets broken. But anyways more about my work. You see I have gone on about Edge and HBK and so far only HBK has directly responded to my comments. Now Edge I'm hoping you're not hiding behind HBK thinking he can protect you from myself Luke or Scottie. Well Edge I'm waiting for ya. Undertaker again Don't think I have forgotten about you either. It's been a few days since you have shown your cowardice in not accepting my hell in a cell challenge. I'm beginning to think you are truly scared of me and that's why you remain in the shadows with Edge. I bet the two of you are hiding together hoping that you don't have to show yourselves.

Mother O'Leary: Oh dear you have had to much to drink. You're talking to no one but us.

Chris: Ma have you not noticed the camera here with me?

Mother O'Leary: What? You brought a camera into this house and broadcast this whole fiasco for everyone to see.

(Mother O'Leary gets up and grabs her purse. She walks over to Chris and starts hitting him with her purse. Chris gets up and walks towards the door while she keeps hitting him. He goes out the front door and shuts it behind him.)

Chris: Man I love coming home for the holidays. (Shouts at the door) Look ma a new record. It only took three hours this time to kick me out of the house. Man I forgot my Guinness. Oh well more for da. Now where am I going to sleep tonight?

(Chris starts to stumble down the street as the camera fades to black.)

End RP

again not sure if this what you are looking for as a sample but it helps show my writing skill.

[Kikki]

I have to apologise in the delay concerning a response to your bio submission. Can you please expand a little on your personality before being accepted.

I don't want to pressure you into RP'ing in a specific way, because you are very much at liberty to RP as you wish, however generally putting the name of the person speaking first as you have done in your sample is un-necessary and it should be made clear who it is speaking in the way you write it when RP'ing. Look around the RPG boards for examples. If you require further help, please feel free to PM me.