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| Dargor |
Posted: Nov 4 2009, 08:58 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 6 Member No.: 24 Joined: 21-October 09 |
The great Shadowlord sat upon his ethereal-metaled throne, reveling in the death of many on a battlefield far away.
The mighty demon, in a pewter gargoyle's body, stretched and yawned. He was hungry and impatient, so he went out hunting. Some of his minions scuttled to bring him his hunting-wear, and he prepared to leave. |
| Dargor |
Posted: Nov 4 2009, 12:48 PM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 6 Member No.: 24 Joined: 21-October 09 |
After they brought it he was gone in a flash. As he flapped his mighty wings, he cursed this stupid plane of existence and how it was limiting his great abilities of the demonic plane. But even the mortality of this plane couldn't stop them, and as time passed, he grew stronger--slowly, oh so slowly, but definitely.
Dargor had pondered this for a long time, and after a while it had come to him that he gained more power every time he defeated an opponent--the stronger it was, the more power gained. But for now he would have to live with his limitations. Spotting a great buck below, he swooped down and clumsily bashed it with a wing before sucking it completely dry of both life-force and blood. After his messy meal was done, he winged his way back to the Black Mountain. |
| Dargor |
Posted: Nov 4 2009, 09:49 PM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 6 Member No.: 24 Joined: 21-October 09 |
Dargor is basically an evil demon who escaped from the demonic plane.
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| GOD |
Posted: Nov 9 2009, 06:36 PM
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The Balance Group: Admin Posts: 355 Member No.: 3 Joined: 27-January 07 |
I'd like to start by saying that you don't need to(and shouldn't) separate your posts. After your post, it's the next person's turn. if you miss something you wanted to include, you can edit your post to add it it.
Second, I'm pleased to see what you've written, both because you are new life we need badly, but also because it shows some interesting mental pictures, and I look forward to seeing how you develop. Your writing shows some things I've come to expect, that I'll try to correct gently and continuously so you see when you are doing them, and how to do better. What we need to establish now is your stats. You begin with two attacks, so one will clearly be: [FWACK]: Dargor slams one of his stone appendages into an opponent, dealing serious damage. 5 Blunt. {Melee} But your other one is still in question. Would you like something with draining blood, something with fire and other demon-ness, or something completely different? Also, how do you see him weathering other people's attacks? Would he take the hits and tough it out? be to fast to get hit? What? |
| Dargor |
Posted: Nov 10 2009, 08:37 PM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 6 Member No.: 24 Joined: 21-October 09 |
I like [FWACK].
His other attack should be something like: [Drain]:Dargor draws on the magic of the demonic plane and drains x LP from one opponent, half of which he gains himself. (x+4EP) Since he's in a pewter gargoyle's body, he's kind of slow and can't move or attack very quickly, but also because of his body, he can withstand heavy attacks and deal out some serious damage when he hits. Also, maybe there should be items he can get that are vials of blood and act like food or ointments--allowing him to gain LP--since that's what he uses for sustenance. |
| GOD |
Posted: Nov 14 2009, 12:44 PM
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The Balance Group: Admin Posts: 355 Member No.: 3 Joined: 27-January 07 |
Hp: 20
Ep: 10 DP: 1 Traits: [Demon]: Dargor takes +2 from Pure, but -1 Each from Corrupt and Fire. Attacks: [FWACK]: Dargor slams one of his stone appendages into an opponent, dealing serious damage. 5 Blunt. {Melee} [Drain]: Dargor draws on the magic of the demonic plane and drains (X)HP from one opponent, half (rounded down) of which he gains himself. (X+4EP) You can RP health potions as blood, if you want. |
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