Yeah!
east=unclaimed land
west=silent sights
The land of Rainclouds use to be all loners. Rainclouds was a land that was showered with rains many days a week. Many liked the rain because it was like a mist that fell down most of the time. They were not so much like loners because foxes lived in sections. In every fourth of the land lived many foxes and wolves. The wolves steered clear of the foxes, staying to the east. Some foxes stayed in the north use to it’s climate and the same for the west and south foxes. These foxes and wolves came up with a plan to bond together. Wolves made a pack called Taunted Turmoil. North foxes, Whistling Winds. West foxes, Silent Sights. South foxes, Radiant Rains.
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One day something happened… The land was going through a drought period. Rainclouds had been in a drought for a solid two seasons, but in the south, Radiant Rains, there was no drought. They still got their usual rains. Many started to envy them. Foxes and wolves looked at them with glares every time they saw a Radiant Rain fox. Many wolves and foxes wondered why they were having a drought. They were questioning themselves, “Did we do something wrong to upset the clouds?” or “Is there something out there that put a curse on us, but not Radiant Rains?" No fox dared to challenge Radiant Rains because they knew they would lose due to conditions and many Aldors and Aloras would frown upon them. The aldors and Aloras still stuck to their skulk.
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…But Taunted Turmoil could not stand it anymore. They spent about a month planning on how to attack this skulk. These wolves did not have that much of a strategy. They just barged into Fragrant Forest, all clumped together, in search of Hazy Hollow. Once they found them, they rushed into the hollow and attacked. Radiant Rains were definitely out numbered. Taunted Turmoil was attacking fiercely, but Radiant Rains managed to stay together. Then the Alpha had come face-to-face with the Aldor of Radiant Rains. He was just about to attack when the Alpha was trampled by the Silent Sights Ald. The Ald and some other members, of Silent Sights, were on a patrol and heard the tussle. Taunted Turmoil was surely out numbered, so they fled and made a campsite on the border of the territory. Silent Sights agreed to help Radiant Rains if Taunted Turmoils dared to attack again.
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…Meanwhile in Whistling Winds, they had no clue of this battle in the south, mutiny was forming. The Ald of Whistling Winds didn’t like how the Aldor was. The Ald wanted to attack Radiant Rains and take over their land and then slowly and gradually take over the rest of Rainclouds. The Ald quickly got many foxes to mutiny with him. He slyly tricked them to do this, by flooding them with stories of what would happen when they took over the land of Rainclouds. Once the Ald was ready they attacked the Aldor and the rest of the skulk. The Ald’s army was quickly defeated and sent to exile. They did not leave; they took over half of Whistling Winds. The Ald’s group is trying to get more foxes and grow stronger before attacking Whistling Winds again. The Aldor is shocked by his Ald’s choice of live. He always thought that his land was plenty and would only fight if needed.
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What will happen…
…So what do you think probably needs editing because I did none.