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Title: website critique


Kommissar - November 8, 2010 07:28 AM (GMT)
http://www.wix.com/kommissar/main

i'm building a website, could do with some critique if you guys are willing.

the gallery has only a few shots of my work, i can;t see a point adding much more right this second, obviously.

Captain Thomas - November 8, 2010 11:59 AM (GMT)
Looks great so far, but you might want to make the gray text a bit lighter so it's easier to read...

wookieegunner - November 8, 2010 02:07 PM (GMT)
I'll check it out later. For some reason it doesn't load on my iPad. :)

rodtheworm - November 8, 2010 09:32 PM (GMT)
Few typos in there that could do with ironing out - capital Is, your/you're, woulden't/wouldn't - but otherwise I'm liking it. Really nice effect on changing between tabs!


Capt. - November 9, 2010 02:39 AM (GMT)
Very nice, mate... might be dropping you a line soon. I have ideas.

Ophilia Midkiff - November 10, 2010 02:48 AM (GMT)
It looks flashy, but you're going to lose a lot of people if they can't properly load it. For instance, no one's going to be able to view it on a mobile phone. I don't mean to burst your bubble, but pretty websites like yours aren't always user-friendly. (Creating usability reports used to be part of my job description.)

And the editor in me does cringe a bit at the grammar and capitalization. :-)

Kommissar - November 10, 2010 04:53 AM (GMT)
good point Ophilia,
though i'm not as concerned about iphone users seeing my site.. certainly something i had not considered before, thanks!.

and yeah, this is just a public draft, nothing i have put on signature, email and business cards yet, so my rough draft spelling is just a few moments of typing.

keep em coming! i'll update in a few days when work isnt busy




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