Order of the Swords Units

[Kenji Usima]

SUITS
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General and Technical Data
Model number: ReV-XP01
Code name: Silver Unit-1 "S-1"
Unit Type: Highspeed Melee Mobile Suit
Manufacturer: ReVcorp
Operator: Kojey Rian Revulias, Jr.
First Deployment: February 23, Cosmic Era 74
Accommodation: Pilot only, in panoramic monitor/linear seat cockpit in torso
Head Height: 17.89 Head Height
Weight: Max weight 19 metric tons
Construction: Unknown
Power Plant: Ultracompact Energy Battery, power output unknown
Equipment and Design Features:

• Sensors, range unknown

Fixed Armaments:

• 2 x Rev-SVR00P "Kido" palm beam cannon, mounted on palms
• 2 x ReV-SIL22R 31mm CIWS, fire-linked, mounted in head
• 2 x beam saber, stored on hips, hand-carried in use
• 2 x MX2200 beam shield generator, mounted on forearms
• 2 x Rev-SIlv3r high powered energy rifle; hand carried in use

Remote Weapons: N/A
Optional Hand Armaments:

Technical and Historical Notes

The ReV-XP01 "Silver Unit-1" was the first successful unit created by the famed ReVcorp. Orignally designed by Kojey Revulias I, it was his hope that one day Kojey Revulias, Jr would be the first to pilot it. However, not long into it's development, Kojey Sr was assassinated by an unkown force, leaving Kojey Jr. to run the company himself. Using his intellect and master manipulation, Kojey pushed his staff into further development, coming up with the current version of the Silver itself.

The technologic advances faced in the s-1's systems would lead to the creation of the Silver Gundam itself. Fearing the possibility of being overpowered, Kojey demanded all Silver development be stopped and S-1's were made the Order's mass production model. The suits themselves are given few weapons to allow them to move at excessively high speeds.


SHIPS

General and Technical Data

Class: Firestorm
Name: OTS-RR01 "Ivan"
Unit type: Battleship
Manufacturer: OTS (Order of the Swords)
Operator: Order of the Swords
First deployment: 16 November C.E. 80
Dimensions: overall length 350 meters
Wingspan: unknown
Weight: unknown
Propulsion: unknown
Equipment and design features: sensors, range unknown; ablative armor; optional space booster
Fixed armaments: 2 x RR09 "Livid" dual beam cannon, mounted on main body above linear catapults; RR10 "Ionite" 42cm triple cannon, mounted on main body; RRx0 "Ex Mortis" positron cannon, mounted on forward end of main body; 12 x 40mm CIWS, mounted on main body; missile launchers (mounts "Neidhardt" space missiles; "Parsifal" ground missiles; "Dispar" interceptor missiles), mounted on main body; 4 x torpedo launcher (mounts "Wolfram" M25 torpedoes), mounted on main body; anti-beam depth charge launchers, mounted on main body
Mobile suits: 10
Mobile weapons: x1 ReV-XX01 "Silver"; x8 ReV-MP01 "S-1"; x1 ReV-MP01 (custom colored by Miharu Yuki)

Launch catapults: 2

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General and Technical Data

Class: Archangel
Name: OTS-RRx1 "Percival"
Unit type: Flagship//Battleship
Manufacturer: OTS (Order of the Swords)
Operator: Order of the Swords
First deployment: 16 November C.E. 80
Dimensions: overall length 350 meters
Wingspan: unknown
Weight: unknown
Propulsion: unknown
Equipment and design features: sensors, range unknown; ablative armor; optional space booster
Fixed armaments: 2 x "Lohengrin" positron blaster cannon, stored in front 'legs'; 2 x "Gottfried Mk.71" 225cm high-energy beam cannon; 2 x "Valiant Mk.8" 110cm linear cannon; 24 x surface-to-ship missile launcher; 16 x surface-to-air missile launcher; 16 x "Igelstellung" 75mm automatic multi-barrel CIWS
Mobile suits: 10
Mobile weapons: x1 ReV-XX01 "Silver"; x8 ReV-MP01 "S-1"; x1 ReV-MP01 (custom colored by Miharu Yuki)

Launch catapults: 2


Technical and Historical Notes

Two battleships based off of the Archangel [The Percival] (2nd/3rd War) and the ZAFT's Minerva ship [The Ivan] (2nd War), the Ivan and Percival are the only ships currently in use by the Order of the Swords. Built to house the Silver and a squad of nine, they have yet to see battle. Referred to by those who have seen them as "ghost ships", they has been reported to "vanish" into thin air. This is due to ReV-Corps prototype Holofoil, similar to the Mirage Colloid of the Blitz Gundam.

[Amaya]

Ok.....

So nothing too special about the suits.....

Your ships though are confusing as hell.

1) Which ship does that pic even GO to?

2) For the Percival, you simply copy/pasted the actual AA's weapons. For the Ivan, you simply copy/pasted the Minvera's weapons and changed SOME of the names. You copy pasted the equipment for both of them.

3) You say in their history they have some special "holofoil", but there is no other mention of this in either app, not even on the equipment list, and you also fail to explain how its any different from actual MC.

4) Apparently your MSes are on two ships at the exact same time, because both have the exact same MS roster (so there are two Miharu Yuki's?)

5) They're also apparently the same size, even though they're based on two different ships, which were different sized, and considering they have the exact same weaponry as their originals, I would assume they'd be the same size to accomodate everything.

That's about it for now.

[Kenji Usima]

Yeah I just noticed some quirks, gimme a sec.

~Miharu Yuki's equipment is on both b/c she brings it between ships.

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IF hasnt been very lovely to me, so a lot of what I had fixed//changed didnt go through.

Gimme a tad, yes? ^.^

[Blaze: Demon of Razgriz.]

This still being worked on?

[Aden Allett]

Is Kenji even around anymore?

[Blaze: Demon of Razgriz.]

I have no idea which is why I asked.