|QUOTE (Kyta @ Apr 26 2011, 10:15 PM)|
|OH GOD SO MANY WORDS HOW DO I EVEN..................|
|QUOTE (Eevee @ Apr 26 2011, 07:37 PM)|
| I'm actually going to give critic, so don't take it too hard but think about what I say :U|
First of all, scratch sprites ARE hard to critizise, since there is no list you have to follow.
But mistakes I do spot in some of your sprites are things like the head perspective. In your biggest sprite on the top, you look at the head and don't really know what angle you're looking at it from. Its shading also has minor flaws as far as I can tell.
The second scratch, that uber-thing... It doesn't seem even close to be finished but the legs look messed up and I can't actually make out the head ^^'
With your first attemt on a werewolf, the legs are weird positioned again, the arms seem a little weird because of the really soft shading in usage with that kind of fur,[/blue] the overall shading is pretty good though.
Your second werewolf.. Overall, it looks really good. [color=purple]But when you go into detail, you see things like the teeth. You can't really make out where the mouth is at all. I mean, you see the teeth, but what you see of it doesn't look like the form a mouth has. And don't wolfes actually have 4 calws? Huh. I do like what you did with the shading for it, you can see it well on one ear, the tail and the streched leg, but you kind forgot setting a position for the light source. It's like it's coming from all angles. ALL OF THEM *cough*
To your latest scratch. To be honest, I do believe it is your worst so far. The body positioning is off. At it self it might work, but not when it carries a giant shell on its back. The head is in profile, which makes it unuseable as a pokemon sprite and a lack of facial expression. What I really do like it what you did to that mass of white fur, or at least your shading for it. Makes it look fluffy. I like fluffy... :3 But you kinda messed that up by not setting a light source again. It seems you spent a liiittle to much time on the fluffy, because the legs and the arms look uncreative and the feet and hands don't even have a real form at all. Sadly, on top of it, the lines on the shell are wobbily and the perspective on the spikes are off.
I know this sounded mean (probably) but I told you what I found, and maybe these things will help you improve.
And please, PLEASE don't bitch about what I said.