Shinigami, Bleach Crossover.

What? I'm the reason? Wow

*li.u now feels all special and warm and fuzzy inside

I still think you're making it sound a bit too easy for her sake. Assuming that I buy into your whole 'enhance with Chakra' reasoning, it still had way too much effect for a first 'adrenalin-driven' try. Sure, she has the excellent Chakra control to pull it off, but she has no fucking clue how to do it properly...and if it were as easy as haphazardly pumping Chakra into one's limbs, everyone could do it. So, while I can accept that her strength and speed are temporarily boosted by more or less subconcious Chakra manipulation, the effects were just too damn perfect. Besides, it still doesn't explain how the hell she suddenly pulled off Taijutsu Combos like that.

And as for Zaku just underestimating her: He stopped doing that after he got the first powered up punch to the face. But even after that he was totally dominated by super!Sakura. But meh, you already conceded that you'll edit it at some point, so I shall leave it at that for now.

Anyway, get to work lackey, so I can finally rate this crap!

But I don't WANNA!!!!!


I've got a lot to think about before I even THINK about coming back to finish this though, so it may take a while. :Stares at the calendar for November and winces:

I give my story a 2/10. Major sux!! XD

This post has been edited by Asakura on Aug 25 2008, 03:00 AM